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In:sincerity

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You spoke insincerely
of the night; you said:
'There is nothing there but space.'

          (I saw rhythm - poetry - art)

You spoke insincerely
of the day; you said:
'There is nothing there but space.'

          (I saw rhythm - poetry - art)

You spoke insincerely
of your love; you said
     there was something there! Honest.

     Ok, there WAS something there,
there was nothing there but space,
I agree, to be thus fair,
and in all sincerity.
I have placed this one under humor, since sarcasm is humor too. And this is supposed to be sarcastic. Maybe not to everyone, but I was hoping to have a play of words here.

-Mai
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drop-asd's avatar
Haha, this is really gorgeous. I think your idea rocks! :clap: